Great progress made this module, however as the video has not been uploaded by the rough cut deadline for assessment I am unable to give you directed feedback or a grade beyond L1 for the video as it is incomplete.
However micro aspects you have done well: Mostly well framed shots and a variety of angles (L3) Shots are mostly steady and smooth movements (L3) Good use of mise-en-scene with some attention to detail (L4) location/costume - maybe make up not realistic Narrative makes some sense (L4) Confident performance Clearly identifies the genre (L4)
Improvements Title sequence missing (no titles) (L1) No soundtrack or foley (L1) Cut down the killer shots to hide the hands (L3) Colour correction is a subtle art - try using blue to make Becki look dead (L4) Balance the lighting levels in the pans across the city and identify where titles will go (L4) Hit the final deadline (Fri 2nd March 5pm) (L1)
Beth, Becki
ReplyDeleteGreat progress made this module, however as the video has not been uploaded by the rough cut deadline for assessment I am unable to give you directed feedback or a grade beyond L1 for the video as it is incomplete.
However micro aspects you have done well:
Mostly well framed shots and a variety of angles (L3)
Shots are mostly steady and smooth movements (L3)
Good use of mise-en-scene with some attention to detail (L4)
location/costume - maybe make up not realistic
Narrative makes some sense (L4)
Confident performance
Clearly identifies the genre (L4)
Improvements
Title sequence missing (no titles) (L1)
No soundtrack or foley (L1)
Cut down the killer shots to hide the hands (L3)
Colour correction is a subtle art - try using blue to make Becki look dead (L4)
Balance the lighting levels in the pans across the city and identify where titles will go (L4)
Hit the final deadline (Fri 2nd March 5pm) (L1)